lol, its spelled Beyond...not beyong :D
I think the reason some people gave you bad reviews was because of the blackout. alot of the people here are mad crazy when it comes to voting and shit, the beginning looked like any other good cartoon, yet again our mind wanders. Once that ended, there was a black out for about 5 seconds or so, i ALMOST clicked out, but then again i found the greatness :D i liked the mellow dramatic differences that you make between otehr rival cartoon. excellent job, it looked like this was storyboarded! nice angles! gl for the futa
i put a note on author's comments about this thx for telling me about that
excellent job. loved the graphics and such, 100 extra points for originality, i like the mellow feel to it, bring me back to Adult Swim :D
its too bad adult swim doesn't hang out on NG. bastard corporate corporations.
lol....its not gonna come out is it :D
i thought that flash was pretty good, i liked your style, i dont recall seeing it before in any other cartoon that ive seen. i liked the music it, flows well with your theme to the cartoon, one thing though...whos randomon? is it like some digimon character?
not bad of a job although it seemed like a copy of fallen angel during the car scene...
good job, im not too fond of stick animation but this one surpasses all the ones ive seen i really like ur style of "foundation" the different way u put things to together, nice music touch, i like the feeling of it especially the followthrough at the top of the screen, gj
"surpasses all the ones i've seen"?? I've seen much better. I have to admit that Sloppy Fight 2 is better than mine, and you should see Pain Arena 4 when it comes out.
The review of a lifetime
Okay now im going to make this a review of a lifetime becuase i kno animators like u absolutely HATE the reviews that either say good job or bad job without anything to improve on, merely pointless i think. Lets start with youre story. Seeing as ive seen youre cartoons a number of times im still going to give u a proper review and the key concept to this is that u need a good story to make a good cartoon. this gets a 4/5 for me. my explaination is that whenever u have such a "spin off" of a subject like the petrol boy to the bannings of such, to make it have more taste i believe there has to be.. i guess u can say... more spin offs, such that like banning could lead to this and this and this. And u also kept on using the old people as references which is funny but in the sense would only be funny with two plots in one, like one plot with two sides of a story. and also i liked the little sounds to split up the areas nice touch, but the story may not follow the music but thats wat youre cartoons are about! i respect that! and i probably dont have to touch on the animating since u have youre own style! thats the last of my review but one more thing i noticed sumthing pretty funny, hehehe, when chairs get banned and we cut to the "meeting room" i noticed that all the "clients" where seated on chairs! lol n e ways gj <<<< dont really need to say anything n e ways!
hey a little info
by the way nice collab ans since u were havin that audio problem ill help u with that. if u stream ur audio, it will follow your animation so u dont have to worry bout syncing ( trust me i had to do a 5 imn syncing animation all by mouse) so try streamin the audio and then just upload ur same file again on newgrounds.
ui really liked your style hopefully we get to see more of u here. i rilly liked your logo also, but to improve you cartoon, perhaps add sumthing to the preloader than just the black screen , or even rather that ng preloader. also try to make this longer , and since i liked your style i awarded u greatly on that, using positive and negative space very nice, but u should put more detail into it, unless this proves to go with the story... gl
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