TheMonkMob's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My GOD, Robots! episode 2]

the review of a lifetime

Now this will be the review of a lifetime for you.. Lets begin shall we? Lets start with audio, the great fundamental need that every cartoon has or needs, in this case you, you contain audio, but that f which is just plain humans, stupid humans... now the best thing to do for you, is to break away from these stupid humans or lets refer them to...wlll....blammed personnel, now you try to break away but you cant... y? becuase u need to edit, edit with all your might, in flash there is a bottom panel that will reduce your "mumbling" so everything wont be muffled, much like yours, secondly you need audio, audio of that is which compelling and flows with your cartoons, the much you have follows but you need more, as to make the cartoon "have a feeling" now the reason u didnt get blammed is because of your artwork, i admire your artwork greatly, you have good style and taste for a enthusiastic touch to a cartoon, I like your fast movement animation, very nice job, well done... moving on to writing, i can see that u have taken an oppportunate time to wrtiing thi script, but until we see sumthing big and following the story, your viewers will be bored as hell, they mite not necessarily blam you (becuase of your artwork) but your scores will eventually go down bits. What we have to see is that script writing and animation flow together, that is a key to well made animation, so in the end-clean up your voice acting-music-and a bit more enthusiasm in your script writing that flows AS enthusiastically as your cartoon

-TheMonkMob

[Runawayhand]

Your needs

I like this cartoon and its fundamentalities, but in your previous review statements i came across one that said " why do people think this was supposed to be funny?" well the reason that is is because of your music, your music i can tell has come from sorts of looney tunes, when he went up the elevator we can sense the regular hostility and fast paced CARTOONY music, so there you go overall i like your style of animation and graphics, and since others havve spoken, i wont say n e thing bout the bomb test, gl on others

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Thank yew, meester mafia monk.

[What Can Be Changed]

Reitterate

Nice film, i loved your style even though u may not understand this because you are russian but again very nice job, but try to expand your horixon and expand your topics rather then hope and help and outcomes, this would make a future film more powerful then the next and your style is very different and epic u must be working on these animations for times for thought and future again nice job
-The Monk Mob

[GunChest]

nice job

i really liked this cartoon, nice use of swift 3d if thats wat u used, next time tho try to use it on everything that u have, grafix would look even better,very nice job, mite want to develop the story a little better also, u should probably make this a series because it looks like a rbocop turn out with a spin, i like it, keep it up
-The Monk Mob

GunChest responds:

Thanks mjsandhe,
3D Flash Ani was used. Episode I is on its way in March. Check it out and get into the GunChest mode! Let justice prevail. Peace on earth.

[NG Anger Management]

pathetic

dude comon is that the best u can do? seriously, i kno its stik figures, at least put the keyframes togeter to make it look good, band lets wait a couple of seconds for the stik figure to react....boring dude i liked the sounds and the fact that its not that bad of grafix, compably to CRAP, make it better, make a plot, if its bluntly funny then make it blunt, dog poops the end there ya go, -----------bang---------bitch--------bang-----wat now--------bang,, amazingly boring aint it?!
try harder
-The Monk Mob

[runnin' patrick]

argg

wats up with these cartoons guys, wait THIS ISNT EVEN A CARTOON!!! OR A MUSIC VID!!! it suks comeon, usin cutout for all ur images and crappy lyrics, dude comeone get up with better stuf, run patrick run....wow nobody cares.
plot-nun
crap-yes
-The Monk Mob

mortimernova responds:

we used nuns in the plot?!? that's why everything is coming out crappy... nuns can't do anything!

[beam sabre]

hmmm

i can say not bad, u prollly need a bit better animation but i think u did a good job for wat u got now, maybe next time u can get credits for tha music and plus it just makes ur cartoon look good, nice job

[A talk with portal viewrs]

dude...

this is idiocracy, wat is this crap, post it in the forums, this site is for audio and animation. you didnt have audio AT ALL, which was never backed up by ANIMATION, this is just plain crap, wow change peoples mind....yea rite learn to do flash the rite way

[The Final Task]

Where art thou plot?

Thre really is no plot whatsoeva, i think your brightness should be higher even though ur tryin got keep the cartoon epic, i kno that but at least keep it bright enuff so ur viweres can actually see it. I liked ur graphics not bad, no plot tho, a story is pointless is thers no plot. Its like sayin "a house" what the hell is the a house, what does it have to do with n e thing, and theres nothing that describes it. and also make the scene a little more defined, your high skill is probably grafix, fix everything else up and u good 2 go